Looks great! text is good! Only thing I am not sure about is the lightning, and there are hardly any things in front of the focal, change that, and this would be great
Agreed with maximus. Don't like that light source. It doesn't make sense. But the focul looks good to me. I like the little smudge in front of his face, looks cool. Maybe sharpen his face a tiny bit more. Like the colors in the bg a lot. Keep it up.
