Ok, i went back and looked at some of my old stuff as some sugested in my last post ( http://www.gamerenders.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=374636 ) and i came up with this I was not sure about the text so i did a second version Personally i like it at the top right more but i wasnt sure if the rest of the image was to open ? Anyway all comments welcome EDIT:Taking into account some of the comments. Ok i went back and reworked some layer and added some adjustment layers and tried to add flow to it, what you think ?
Okay, nice, this looks better. Try to create some flow with some C4D renders and try to add a light source with a white soft brush. As you said, the rest of the image looks very open, try to use the burn / dodge tool to create some more darker / lighter parts. Also use gradient maps / curves etc... simply adjustement layers for some color, contrast, depth. As for now the background just fits with the color of the render but not with the flow. You can create some depth if you want by blurring the bg a bit, thats how you can create a focal point, too. This one is better than the devil may cry one.
