Halo Wars

v1



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v2

 

Not bad, colours need some work but text is cool =].

 

needs a sharpen and more color
backgorund and rest is nice

 

I think a sharpen would make it stand out a bit more. I like it though.

 

not bad the backgorund is okay like need more flow.The text jus try keeping it simple otherwise looks ok.

 

thanks party people gonna try out some of the comments

 

yeah, a sharpen and maybe some grunge effects, just something to add a little edge, BUT i absolutely love the writing and it is a good tag, gj.

 

yeap all u need is it to be a bit more sharpened

 

I like the background but it looks too blurred out. Good job.

 

I agree with the sharpen. And the color could use a smidgen of work. Other than that I like it!