Halo 3

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by .DOom., Jan 22, 2008.

  1. Jan 22, 2008 at 9:20 PM #1
    .DOom.

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    C&C please
     
  2. Jan 22, 2008 at 9:21 PM #2
    [.BC.] David

    [.BC.] David 吉祥物

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    Messy :S..
     
  3. Jan 22, 2008 at 9:37 PM #3
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    looks ok take off the text though
     
  4. Jan 22, 2008 at 9:46 PM #4
    [.BC.] David

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    the replacing of the render in the top right is to obvious, unless u meant it that way, good flow and text placement isn't very good, but i like the text used.
     
  5. Jan 22, 2008 at 10:33 PM #5
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    i dont really like how all the c4ds go upwards, you should work more on flow and composition
     
  6. Jan 22, 2008 at 10:37 PM #6
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    Work on flow, and depth.
    Nice coloring though, it looks pretty nice in my opinion.
     
  7. Jan 22, 2008 at 11:35 PM #7
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    i agree entirely, aside from that the bg is ok, but like also mentioned the flow is kinda not there, its ok for now but consider it later on ^_^
     
  8. Jan 22, 2008 at 11:39 PM #8
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    Not bad, but the text ruins it :(
     

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