The half life symbol looks choppy. And the beasts added look out of place, the lighting doesnt really match, its coming from behind them but its on their face.. Not bad overall.
the text is horrible dont just slap text on cause u feel you have to >.< it also looks LQ which is very bad in a manip
It looks good, Vinnie. But its not done. Try changing the text alittle and the composition of the sig.
its ok dude but tbh i dont like the lines around the chick at the front you have burnt the fire to much for it too sorta look like fire too :S but still not a bad concept gud choice of renders, you got the lighting right which is gud and its not too bad nice work man cant wait to see your next piece