heres my latest render, in my opinion its the best ive done so far (except for the text which im not sure how to get rid of). original: http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a44/snake...9o/guything.jpg
For the text in the render, just use a clone stamp tool or the blur tool over it. As for the render, it's pretty decent but you left a lot of the white edges all over it.