Gundam Sig ( My First ) C+c

Well this my first sig and i use Gimp.

C+C please

 

text aint good im afraid, its also too far away from the focal, aint bad for a first

 

Try centering both the render and the text to fix that focal problem mentioned above. Keep the color of the text within the color scheme of the signature.
What you dont wanna do is put two things on oposite edges of the sig because that makes it a pain to look at.
So fix it- center things more or less and it'll look fine.
Nice job on a first sig btw.