Looks like too many C4D's of different colors in random patterns... but somehow it comes together nicely? It makes no sense! But I like it. Just not so much on the text, and it could use a little better flow.
it's decent, but I'd lose the white ... puppet ... monster... teddy thing : p it takes away all the attention from the face, being white and all... you might wanna try sticking to one or two main colours though It does seem a bit chaotic with all the abstracts in different tones
Well for most of this I followed a tut and it said to make sure the stock / render was holding something. Thanks everyone