Grieve

How should I improve this?
V2

V3

V4

 

Change the text. Placement is okay but the scripty font looks tacky and unbalanced.

 

i agree the text placement looks kinda random

 

the smaller text doesn't work and doesn't match

 

How about now? I changed the font

 

The new text is definitly an imrpovement.
Overall its a nice sig, its a little monotone but i know thats sort of what the theme of the sig suggests.

 

^ i agree it's a bit monotoned. Im still not diggin the text i think it was the placement try to move it around. Not to shabby of a sig though. good job

 

Er, how about now? I really don't know how I should place my text

 

I would not even use a text on this i just over looked it. Would look better without it.

 

I see, I thought it would look plain without text

 

If you don't know what to do with the text then dont do it cause if u just slap on a text you can kill a sig. I like v3

 

k, thanks for your help

 

its a bit plain and monotone, maybe add more of that fog effect on the right side to balance it out. right side is a bit empty