Goldenhawk

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  1. Drayheart

    Drayheart Well-Known Member

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    sooo after the assasin's creed one i made this one

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  2. iK3VRR

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    This one is pretty boss.. I like the smudging
    Text looks pretty good and everything flows well together :)
     
  3. Drayheart

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    i tihnk it's the blur, becouse i didn't smudge at all :P

    thx for replying
     
  4. Reserection.

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    its ok u are getting better but working on the key factors will help you out, smudge blur, sharpen you just need to look for a good stock to work with
     
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    thanks for replying

    some more cnc would be kind

    greez dray
     
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    it looks decent, i dont like the blur over the render, usually its a good idea to keep the render clean without anything on top of it
     
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    Wow, it's quite decent, loving the dreamy effect (I guess you did that with guissian blur and set on lighten :P).
    Is that my render? :eek:
     
  8. Drayheart

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    exactly i asked you to cut it for me
    i thought it had good potential for my bg

    ya did it with blur and soft light or summin

    greez dray
     
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    I like it but it was extremely hard for me to figure out what the render was. reduce some of the effects over the eagle
     
  10. Drayheart

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    do you like this one better


    personally i love the golden aphosysumthin effektone the left cliff

    greez ^^
     
  11. Killah™

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    Too many effects on the <strike>eagle</strike> imo, rest is good.

    edit : hawk ? w/e lol
     
  12. Drayheart

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    ya dunno hawk sounds so .. nice xD

    comment v2 please

    greez
     
  13. Killah™

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    something inbetween v1 and v2 would be better, 'bird' isnt blended enough in this one, and too much in v1
     
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    this one should be ok??

    are there any other things i should make better?
     
  15. astranger79

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    i rckn you should have some effects over the wings, but keep the head and that general area clear of to many effects
     

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