Goldenhawk

sooo after the assasin's creed one i made this one





2nd version





3rd version

 

This one is pretty boss.. I like the smudging
Text looks pretty good and everything flows well together

 

i tihnk it's the blur, becouse i didn't smudge at all

thx for replying

 

its ok u are getting better but working on the key factors will help you out, smudge blur, sharpen you just need to look for a good stock to work with

 

thanks for replying

some more cnc would be kind

greez dray

 

it looks decent, i dont like the blur over the render, usually its a good idea to keep the render clean without anything on top of it

 

Wow, it's quite decent, loving the dreamy effect (I guess you did that with guissian blur and set on lighten ).
Is that my render?

 

exactly i asked you to cut it for me
i thought it had good potential for my bg

ya did it with blur and soft light or summin

greez dray

 

I like it but it was extremely hard for me to figure out what the render was. reduce some of the effects over the eagle

 

do you like this one better


personally i love the golden aphosysumthin effektone the left cliff

greez ^^

 

Too many effects on the <strike>eagle</strike> imo, rest is good.

edit : hawk ? w/e lol

 

ya dunno hawk sounds so .. nice xD

comment v2 please

greez

 

something inbetween v1 and v2 would be better, 'bird' isnt blended enough in this one, and too much in v1

 

this one should be ok??

are there any other things i should make better?

 

i rckn you should have some effects over the wings, but keep the head and that general area clear of to many effects