Not bad. I like the bg a lot But the problem I see is this - His face looks a little bit blended into the sig. :| That doesn't look good and it weakens the focul severely. Erase some of that effectage to his face and it'll look sweet. Very nice composition. Much better than your current imo. ^_^
Alright, I'll fix that. Thanks for the feedback. Added another version and cleaned up the face area a bit.