Go Easy

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by ReeceBulb, Jul 27, 2010.

  1. ReeceBulb

    ReeceBulb Member

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    Only started making them again today and just getting to grips again. I made the Mario one first but wasn't happy so I added the god of war stock. Any tips and comments welcome :)

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    Not sure about the grainy look.. the colours are great though. Also theres a lack of a lightsource in them.. most noticably the GoW tag.

    I like how you've work the text in both..

    I'd like to see you use this style in a smaller tag though.
     
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    thanks, ill give it a try in a smaller tag or to improve these ones ;)
     
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    Turn down the spatter way to grainy, they're overblended, text is ok but dont place it to far away from your focal it becomes distracting and work on the lighting. Keep it up ^^.
     
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    they lack depth, looks like colours just infront of a render, and the colours are bland.
    and the grainly look not working there. ermm try more colour and no grain for now
     
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    thanks for the feedback guys :)
     

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