mmmk ive had about 8 months experiece ive been reading up on some tuts, capturing ideas, and stuff. [: ill try another piece later and try to post it up
You could go a little crazier with the smudging or brush/clipping mask stuff you got going on the left of the render, it would help fill it out more like the others have mentioned. aside from that its very nice, great coloring and great render selection. p.s. text could move, like tub-a-wub said
haha its not a render its a stock and i had to use it 3 times to fill up the back ground...thats sky behind it and i blended the three copied stocks to make it look like on stock [: yeah thats brushing and clipping masks, no smudging [although i do love smudging]. ok ill probably read up on some tuts to find out where text belongs in each tag
I like the usage if the wireframe renders alot Overall it could do with some more fx, and i'm not really a big fan of splatter brushes generally... (Does seem like i'm not a big fan of most fx eh :/) Still, great job