Well this one was a request from someone I'm friendly with who's in the process of a BYOND game and needed a screen made for him. Anyway, this is one of my most recent works, so tell me what you think. I don't normally do stuff that large so it may not be as good as my other stuff, but I'll leave that up to you guys to decide.
I think it could be improved, but it is ok. The text works with it, though I personally think you should have made all of the text with the italics font.
Well.. For a BYOND title screen, it's okay since I've seen some pretty bad ones there lol. Seems you are improving though, Hyper. However.. The effects are not complimenting. I see too many C4Ds and other little effects that seem like they were just put there, to just be there. Work on establishing the flow of effects. Also, erase over Gaara's head/face, try and keep effects off a render/stock's head area because that area is the most important focal most of the time. Text could be a lot better as well. Try playing with multiple fonts.
Thanks a bunch guys, I'll keep all of that in mind next time I attempt something like that, or any of my future works in general. And, it's good to hear that I'm actually improving. I was worrying for a bit that I wasn't.
