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P.S I REALLY need help on text

v.2



v.3

 

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Looks good, nice focal, nice effects. Just try playing around with different fonts for the text. Lower the opacity or change layer options... just fool around and you'll get it eventually.

 

Really nice sig, about the text, just try what is said above me

 

Little too bright for my taste, kind of distracts from the render. Other than that, it's quite fantastic.

 

Get rid of the border, edit the text, and add some yellowish green to it and you will have a lovely signature. Everything looks great except for those things I mentioned, and the signature is a bit bright.

 

I really have no Idead how the green border got there it wasnt in the PSD

will add v.2 with different text

 

there's not really a focal point in there, which means that there are too much effects around the render

also if you remove the from goblin text and leave the back goblin text just the way it is, it would look way better i think

 

I dont get the Second Line please explain more and thanks for pointing out the missing focal

 

Looks pretty good, just a little monotone for my tastes. I think another colour in there would help give it a little boost

 

i think the bottom text is better

 

in v2 you have the text goblin 2 times.. one in the front and one in the back, if you remove the front one it will look better.

 

i agree with leaving the back goblin text and getting rid of the front on.the v2 text together like that is little messy looking for me.and also v2 looks washed out compared to v1.i think if you added more color it would create more depth and make it look much better

 

will add v.3 tommorow and Il remove the front text

 

I really like this one, good focus, good render.