Hman one is better, besides that this one is a little too repetitive even if that is the whole point. Also the glow on the text isn't great. Besides that it's pretty good, I'd choose a different font and make the text plainer, also generally two text sigs aren't very good imo. 68/100
Great concept man, love it. Text normally draws the eye to the focal and having it in both places makes it distracting. But I love the pentooling in between the hands