Freestylin'

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  1. nFx

    nFx Well-Known Member

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    so Colorful Brainzz, Concept, and me decided to freestyle of the top of the dome. this is what we came up with. input?

    [Concept Verse 1]
    Check it! I find my self writin
    Thinkin while typin
    all my words vicious
    as if you were fightin mike Tyson
    words manifest from my brain to the page…
    bars lockin you in, like you’re trapped in a cage…
    so behold this guys wisdom
    as I disguise my system…
    the one that was designed
    to get u to listen…
    my brothers got ---- down on a lock
    colorful brainz leaves the ppl insane
    with lyrics for dayz, there is no rhythmical block
    nfx is right up next…
    with the craziest text…
    mastered his ---- to the point it got so complex..
    so after you’re done reading keep this in mind..
    we’re a freestyle phenomenon
    with the sickest freestyle lines
    .


    [nFx Verse 2]
    I cut ------s open like a surgeon
    priest-like. listen to my blazin' sermon
    i drop MCs in acid
    they melt like plastic, stretch like elastic, so drastic
    my flow got this thread vibrating, son
    ------ my 9, let nFx give em one.
    i spit harder than an interred lunatic.
    droppin' these wicked clips
    my flow: A LETHAL INJECTION.
    burning ------s raw, NO PROTECTION
    it'd be a good idea for me to stop right here
    before i burst some ears, spittin' lyrics that
    bring forth fears and tears
    we ------ing soldiers, marching to a song
    bumpin like Marley's tuff gong.
    wasting ------s that feel we too wrong
    puttin lead in they heads if they fight too strong
    electrifying, my flow so caustic
    any haters? ya'll can suck mahdick. …



    [Brainz Verse 3]
    These stupid mother ------ers don't get it
    This ----'s pathetic, I'll send you his head thru fed-ex.
    You never read it? Never saw it cuz I scared it
    If I put your life at risk, I bet you'd bet it.
    These dumb ass kid turn into critics
    I'm done talking to kids cuz they ridic.
    You lost, These ------s too soft
    I slang words like thugs slang weed at all cost.
    My flow is sharper then a Samurai's Sword
    Lyrically Strangle you and break your vocal chords.
    Gangbangin like the Vice Lords
    My saliva spit runs over you like a 4 Door.
    Slow poke, snort coke
    Can't speak to me cuz you'll just choke.
    and we aint talking about 8 Mile
    Shoot 2 Slugs and put 'em in a file.
    How you gonna step up to me? you a pip-squeak.
    You never step'd up to the greatest your in deep ----.
    I'll break your skull and I'll take your soul
    I'm a body bag collector like I collect Soles.


    Haha, Yeah! This is how we put it down.
    haha PEACE!!
     
  2. Xioushi

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    Very nice ayyy.

    I used to freestyle with my brother and a few friends in MSN convos, 2 bars at a time.

    It's a bit harder to freestyle for me IRL, I don't have the best articulation after my mouth being wired shut for a few months.
     
  3. Sock

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    I can do this:

    I'm.... freestylin'!
    Just sayin' what comes to the top of my head!
    Like it's just ... random! r-r-random!
    oooh! ...... Oooh!
    There's a picture of new york! there's a picture of new york! There's a big fat crazy picture of new york!
    I'm just freestyl-new york!-free stylin! picture of new york! Freestylin'!
    Sometimes when I freestyle I... lose confidence!
     
  4. ChunkyGerbil

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    Yo I be on the track, ------in with my gat. Dem boys dont know me, I got mah mans on my back. Turn around, spit around they be frontin'. I get my ak and I go huntin. Bitches everywhere, they gettin scare. They better be cuz I got them by their hair. They think im wall'n but dat aint true, I got my crew, the ------ u goin do.
     
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    I'm not even going to try
     
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    nd thats wuts up. hahaha good ---- guys. :P
     
  7. Xioushi

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    Hahaa, aight, I'mma go, as soon as I start typing my first line, I aint stop typing till I hit finish it.

    man ever since day onei been harassed and put down
    now im speakin with this rhyme you can call me a circus clown
    i'm just building my mass and increasing my melody
    you're another failed attempt tryna be a fidelity
    you can't be serious the difficulty's minimal
    i'll turn you inside out cause I'm a lyrical criminal
    your mind is in the gutter your lyrics are weak
    you're lips flap the dirt my words bring defeat
    I'm like julius caesar or maybe even nero
    I aint savin no lives but still remainin a hero
    They told me to step it up now you got me being real
    I digest these underclassmen like a value pick meal
    i'm a k-9 with rabies quick-pass me a bone
    i paid your girl a 20 she went rollin on home
    my mind is a dictionary from the verse to the chorus
    the haters may call me barney but I'm a tyrannosaurus.
     
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    And some more stuff..

    I actually write a LOT of poetry and have written songs for my friend's brother. My friend is a singer and her brother is signed to a record label downtown called Epidemik Records.

    Here's somethin else..bit more poetic/emotional:

    Im undeniably the best cause my flaws have reason
    right from k-west i'm fired up this evening,
    evening, night, morning and day
    I continue to fight the love that I stray
    The forgotten emotions, weren't really forgotten
    I just bottled them up till my brain went rotten
    I exploded at you with anger and hate
    I wish you really knew my plan was our fate.
     
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    the blue text is nice to look at
     
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    Heres one for steez

    ay bruv, go down to cotch at the yard. Its proper hard. Seein blads at the pub ye, its swag init. Aight safe bruv, dont be a gob----e.
     
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    nein O_O
     
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    word to you mom
    i came to drop bomb.
     

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