Freestyle

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Strykor, Sep 1, 2009.

  1. Strykor

    Strykor Well-Known Member

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    v1: [​IMG]

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    I like the effects on the left foot (the three lines making it look like his foot is sliding around)
    maybe built on that movement some more.
    The effects on the skateboard seem to be jumbled with no flow.
    I don't like the border.
    Text is O.K
    But it split down the middle with 2 color schemes not liking that.
    And it looks like you tried to make the focal the foot on the skateboard yet i see myself looking at the left foot more.
    Add some color maybe =)
    Just work on it a little bit more and then if you're not sure make a new sig.
     
  3. Strykor

    Strykor Well-Known Member

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    Okay, updated v2. :]
     
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    v2's left side color is nicer but the effect on the foot is over saturated imo. The right side im not feelin and the way its split into 2 different colors kinda ruins the flow. overall its not bad but i think there could be improvements.
     
  5. Strykor

    Strykor Well-Known Member

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    Ya, this is what I am thinking, too. I will make another one for sotw. :D This one kinda sucks. :D
    Thank you :)
    Further comments?
     
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    This one's just not doing it for me. The concept of the effects I like, but it could have been done a lot better. Colors seem weird. Not liking the text in either version... although the second one is better than the first.
     
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    I like the effects and such, but not really feeling the color difference here
     
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    Not feeling this one
     
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    I agree with everything that has been said. The concept is well thought out, but not well executed. The split down the center is just annoying and overall it just seems really messy. Both versions have their pros and cons.
     

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