Freddy Vs Jason

Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by n3wb1e, Sep 29, 2009.

  1. n3wb1e

    n3wb1e Well-Known Member

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    here's something i did moments ago. it's my first submission on Gamerenders in a long time, hope you guys like it.
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    It has a cool look to it, and the overlaying colors/effects make me think of biology or some type of science.

    I think it's awesome for a manipulation.
     
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    The border makes me sad.
     
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    I like your idea :) I have a couple ideas for you to possibly make it better.
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    1) Remove the text. Artwork does not always need text. There is something called the Rule of Thirds. Most of the work i've done contradicts it but its just to get an idea. Basically the central focal point shouldn't be in the center. it makes the general "feel" of the piece look like its boxed in. No where to go. (photography tip that I have been trying to apply to my digital art work)

    1 Question to ask yourself when placing it. Is it distracting?
    In my opinion, the text grabs my attention from the overall piece itself. If anything I'd grab a tablet and just sign my signature on there. (or get a font that does that ;) )

    2) The Border.. really not needed. I dont mean to say this rudely but. That is not a border. its just a line. Actually "make" a border if you plan to put one on there. select all, stroke 5px usually does the trick

    3) Another idea is to recolor it. at this point its all one color. To add emphasis on certain areas, you should add other colors. To build more contrast and what not. Also I personally havn't figured out how to do this but. . The Lighting doesnt seem consistent.

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    hope that helped you :)
     
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    I think thats the SEX....If there was no border or text other then that its the SEX
     
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    wow thats cool
     

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