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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Miasma, Feb 19, 2011.

  1. Miasma

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    eh?
     
  2. Casta

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    I'm horrible at text, but maybe the text could use some improvement. Either than that, I love it.
     
  3. [.BC.] David

    [.BC.] David 吉祥物

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    Yea the text could be improved. Also the focal is a little sharp imo
     
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    Well,I'm gonna tell you the truth.

    The whole things a little to sharp.
    The focal/render is also over sharpened.
    The text is a little wavy and in the wrong spot.Try it smaller in greyish and under the gun.
    Effects/BackGround and the light source are nice.
     
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    I like the text, but I hate it's placement.

    Bit over sharpened. Too much gimps your quality so be careful there.

    I know you threw some lighting effects on there, but make sure when you do that you don't kill your dynamic range. I wanna see some rich blacks in there, but with your "over everything" lighting you lost those darker tones. make sure you think about where the shadows would be if a light was where you put it.
     

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