Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Miasma, Feb 19, 2011.
I'm horrible at text, but maybe the text could use some improvement. Either than that, I love it.
Yea the text could be improved. Also the focal is a little sharp imo
Well,I'm gonna tell you the truth.
The whole things a little to sharp.
The focal/render is also over sharpened.
The text is a little wavy and in the wrong spot.Try it smaller in greyish and under the gun.
Effects/BackGround and the light source are nice.
I like the text, but I hate it's placement.
Bit over sharpened. Too much gimps your quality so be careful there.
I know you threw some lighting effects on there, but make sure when you do that you don't kill your dynamic range. I wanna see some rich blacks in there, but with your "over everything" lighting you lost those darker tones. make sure you think about where the shadows would be if a light was where you put it.
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