Flying High ^^

was in a real good mood while i was doing this. impromptu really
tips pls

 

edited

 

well..thanks for looking at least

 

The overall concept of the piece is nice. However, I'm not sure about the c4d render you chose. It seems a bit "heavy" for the rest of it. Meaning, it just seems a bit out of place with all the vector. It also appears that some edges seem like they need some anti-aliasing. Maybe go back over them and feather it at like .3 or .4? Colors seem ok, but just a personal preference, I guess.

 

Effects and colouring look pretty good but the c4d looks out of place and theres no obvious focal. Try blurring it all a bit.

 

finally...replies!!

um what does anti-aliasing mean and how to do it?

thanks

 

moar c&c please. it's my 1st lp of this type. i really like to improve on doing stuff like this

 

nice colors

 

thanks

btw, im selling this LR in the Paid Tutorials Section along with some other stuff

 

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anti_aliasing

Can't tell you how to do it in photoshop. But when using the pen tool, feather it at .2 or .3 to help reduce it.

 

aah. i see what you mean. probably blur or erase with low opacity or something. thanks