Flash Temp. Oldwall Look .

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  1. Chavarria

    Chavarria Senior Member

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    Hey PeePs.

    The flash is done for 98%.

    If you think something to improve it , then plz say so .

    Dr!ver.



    Version 2
     
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    wiljanslofstra Well-Known Member

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    i get an inlog screen and i cant see him ??? :S

    - wiljanslofstra
     
  3. Chavarria

    Chavarria Senior Member

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    Lol , my bad .

    Link is changed.

    Dr!ver.
     
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    This seems very familiar. Have you posted an earlier version of this before?
     
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    [ED] Audigex Well-Known Member

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    Hey dr!ver =]

    On the whole looks very good. Nice concept, well carried out.

    A few points:
    + Sound when you hover over one of the picture frames is INCREDIBLY annoying after about two times... Maybe have that for the first time you hover over only or something (if that's possible)
    + "Personal Page Name Here" text could do with a little more work to fit in to the style.
    + The H, S, P + C letters need to be sharpened up IMO.
    + When you click on Services, the sound for hovering over the pics is awesome, I <3 it, but it doesn't really fit in to the concept and theme of the site.

    Sorry to be so critical, but with those changes IMO this could be awesome <3

    Good luck,

    -Ste
     
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    I dunno about this one. I've seen hugely better templates from you. = |

    The animation when the frames are coming in at the beginning are kind of cheesy, and there aren't many smooth transitions, like when viewing pictures. it just pops in there.
     
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    Chavarria Senior Member

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    Working on these points now.

    I'm removing the animation on the buttons .

    Dr!ver.
     
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    good job making this i think its really good


    what program you making this with and how much was it?
     
  9. Chavarria

    Chavarria Senior Member

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    I used flash . And i think it was around 400€ . Something like that .

    Dr!ver.
     
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    add more sounds right now its just doing click every time you click kinda duno dull...
     
  11. Chavarria

    Chavarria Senior Member

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    I'm changing it in a few ways.

    The frame with a light above them now.

    Maybe i post V2 later.

    And its hard to find the right sounds tho. :lol:

    Dr!ver.
     
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    Chavarria Senior Member

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    Added version 2.

    So , this is almost on the market for sale then .

    Dr!ver.
     
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    Hmmm... what to say

    I don't like :

    -That you dont have a transperant bg on the flash intro.
    -The light source is wierd. You added many lamps there but I'm not sure quite where it comes from. and the light on the mainframe isnt adding light somewhere. Makes it look surreal, when the frames are more real

    I like :

    -That its original
    -Your use of flash, use small place to do alot. Like on the portfolio thingie.

    Suggestion :

    -I think you should add a logo
    -Put <div align="center"></div> around your flash file so it gets centered
    -maybe try to put the links more randomly
     
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    Chavarria Senior Member

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    around your flash file so it gets centered
    -maybe try to put the links more randomly[/b][/quote]

    I code in html doesnt matter , this is just to show it. but thanks for the tip.

    And what you mean with
    "I don't like :

    -That you dont have a transperant bg on the flash intro.
    -The light source is wierd. You added many lamps there but I'm not sure quite where it comes from. and the light on the mainframe isnt adding light somewhere. Makes it look surreal, when the frames are more real"

    Dr!ver.
     
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    Version 2 looks better imo. But , the form in flash ? Does it work ? Looking nice so far.

    Me.
     

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