Fixed Up

I made this yesterday, first one in about 2 months.





And then I tried to fix it up and came up with this, I think its better than the first but could still touch up on some things, Comments or Crticism?








CnC Appreciated.

 

The color looks a lot better after you fixed it.
I think the text stands out too much. And if there is a render, i'm not really sure what it is.

 

The render is Master Chief, if I'm not mistaken.

It seems too sharp, and the text seems out of place. But just a few touch ups and it could be a really nice tag.

 

Looks nice, but a little too sharp.

 

i like the second version better,but it looks a little sharp.and i cant really tell what the render is.still,not bad for taking time off ^_^

 

Ding Ding Ding! We Have a winer, yeah I think i'll just unsharpen it, and maybe see what else I can do, will post back when I get the last result, any more Comments, really appreciate it guys.

 

i like the idea to the pic

 

v1 2 dark
2nd over blened
too much contrast

 

Thx for all the comments guys, if you know any other way or anything I can do just keep on commenting, im using these comments on my next sig.