This is basically my first ever template, along with coding..in IE, there are white boxes around the text, I haven't figured out how to fix that yet, but I am working on it. www.freewebs.com/laxguy_aof I know, I know, EWWW FREEWEBS! But don't worry, I have a good host lined up, I just haven't found the time to move there. About and Contact, aren't pages yet, I still need to work on them, also haven't found the time. And this site is just about me, my work, what I like, etc, no GFX, other then what I make, and the forum is just something my friend and I were bored and we are thinking of opening it for our friends, as a place to hang out and stuff..so..I'll stop talking and let you guys focus on the site.
First thing I got to say: Make the image fill up the whole screen and not a small part of it. It looks plain. There are places with text that are missing a background. There should be more pages that you made yourself in stead of just links to other pre-made pages. You got those white spots with text because you forgot the " " things in your src tag in iframes part. If you practice some more in coding and add some self made pages it would look a lot more pro. Good Luck
It's too small, the render doesn't help it, the images are massive in size for what they are, the buttons aren't bad, but not great and the content boxes are too simple, I don't like that background, as it will make expanding the template properly hard and the huge logo should be made smaller, so it can at least fit on the page. You should also make all of the images background images.
nice work in freewebs, it isn't easy to make a good working site with html with freewebs. it looks really good! cu
