First Time Attempting A Smudge/abstract Sig

first time i've tried doing something like this.. tell me what you guys think

 

bump?

 

it seems a little empty to me even though the focus is supposed to be on the bit down bottom

 

Not bad. Looks interesting.

 

too many round circles for me..add some more colours in there aswell. good for a first try.

 

not bad but u cant really see the text and the effects are way to small i think maybe if u made them cover the sig a lil more would look even better.