First Template

It's my first template , so don't be harsh

Got any tips for improving , please tell then



Improved V2:


Improved V3:

 

that is actually very nice i love the banner and the side gradients.

maybe lower opicity of the patterns slightly

 

Yeah , i was thinking that too .
I'll post an improved version when i get some more tips

 

Actually that's pretty good. The only thing I can see from this quick glance is the pattern sticks out too much in my opinion.

 

I'll reduce the opacity then .

 

Rite here goes...

1. Change the gradient on the edges.
2. Get rid of the dark purple and put somet that stands out and matches better coz it makes it dull
3. The Banner add some life into it.. brighten it up abit make ppl wanna continue onto the website and wanna see more.
4. Add more links than that ppl are gonna use at least 5 links put more stuff on navigation to show ppl it cant jst fit 4.
5.The text on the banner jazz it up abit.

Thats all the tips for now. Hope you enjoyed my tips and use them in ur next template.

DJ Deemer.

 

Thanks , i'll se what i can do with that

 

im jst making a quick website to sell il show it ya

 

I don't like the navigation, and the gradients at the sides of the web site. But the rest is excellent.

 

V3 added .
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personally the only thing that looks good is the banner

 

Are you serious , it only took like 5 mins to make the banner ?

 

I like it. very good for a first. Nice work

Arbiter

 

Thanks Arbiter

 

The V3 looks nice, simple but nice!