First Sprite

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by J-G, Dec 31, 2007.

  1. J-G

    J-G Well-Known Member

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    my first sprite tag i like it personally

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    as always C&C is appreciated
     
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    BUMP
     
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    eerm not b its a lil big though.the effects ariund ur sprite look reall nice but i think thatc4d on the left jus looks way to odd, u ned t blend it in a lil so u cant see it th way it is also maybe move goku sumwhere coz he looks like hes floating in the air.The text placment is kinda bad try moving it around a lil again.Oh n the effects around goku are kinda hard to see so blur some stuf around him
     
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    thanx anyone else
     
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    Canvas is much too big for the sprite, and the effects don't fit the flow and composition of the sprite. The composition is thrown off by the lack of negative space on the right side, and text is terrible. Colours are bland and monotonous, and it could do with some use of the burn tool around Goku's feet, so as to establish some depth of plane for him to be standing on, as right now he's just floating.
     
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    thanx anyone else
     

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