First Sprite Sig

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by adefenselesskid, Jul 28, 2008.

  1. Jul 28, 2008 at 1:21 PM #1
    adefenselesskid

    adefenselesskid Well-Known Member

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    Umm yeah its the first Sprite tag I have made. I actually figured out I like them. C&C please.


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  2. Jul 28, 2008 at 2:22 PM #2
    steez

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    too bright around the focal
    and too crowded
    alrite job, though
     
  3. Jul 28, 2008 at 2:26 PM #3
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    Your focal is forced. Your contrast is bad and that is a c4d there.
     
  4. Jul 28, 2008 at 2:34 PM #4
    adefenselesskid

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    ^^ umm its the background, its not a C4D.
     
  5. Jul 28, 2008 at 2:52 PM #5
    Sinatran

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    I'm going to have to agree with .BC. steez, the area around the focal is a little too bright. But it does look like a C4D.
     
  6. Jul 28, 2008 at 3:09 PM #6
    adefenselesskid

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    Yeah, its not its an abstract art piece I found.
     

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