First Sprite Ever!

soo tell me what you like, this is my first one i have ever made...

 

its nice its not really a sprite though -_- otherwise only suggestion is dont let yourself have so much deadpace if you expanded the smudging and effects to the right and left i think itd be better ^_^ good colors and text

 

thanks you guys

 

Not really a sprite but the tag has a nice flow. A bit too much open space though.

 

well, it was my first one ever, soo i dont really have the flow of a sprite or anything, but thank you

 

Too much neg space.