First sigs in years... Wow Alright so be as critical as possible, by all means, and how may i change things up? w text Darker gradient stock render is a photo by Dana Ng Kanye pixels fixed, no black thing behind scarf Textless
Much better..you took off some of the glare and can see more of the focal..and alyas try to put your text next to the focal so people don't have to look at two separate images..
In my opinion the darker gradient is still to bright. Maybe make it even more dark? But it looks nice already! And as vegetagirl said, your text is very far from your focal point. which would be the render.
Definitely is too bright there even with the gradient. try a black fill layer set to overlay or soft light