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Discussion in 'GR Classic Archive' started by rizzo, Dec 5, 2004.

  1. Dec 5, 2004 at 7:10 AM #1
    rizzo

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    well here it is rate, comments suggestions welcomed :P

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  2. Dec 5, 2004 at 7:15 AM #2
    ASM

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    nice work for a first

    although i think you should change the quote text from 'your about too' to 'you're about to'
     
  3. Dec 5, 2004 at 8:24 AM #3
    Ben™

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    very nice for a first
    maybe make the render a bit bigger, and yes, change the text like ASM said
     

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