First Render

My First render i ever done, Choppy, But thinks it okay by forst time.

Rep/cred if it good for a First timer ?

Original:
http://www.cheathappens.com/showwp.asp?wp=943&n=6


REndered:



Think i used about a hour or two

DONT LOOK AT THE GUN ON THE SHOULDER !

 

dude, for your firsr render... things a re looking good! g/j

 

Thx for the good comment

 

yeah its *real choppy other than that great job, better than my first.

*real choppy was sarcasm i dont see anything wrong

 

gj for first time,keep it up

 

Nice render Keep up the good work

 

hey, you're not a beginner, that's a real good job, keep it up

peace

 

good job, but zoom in a bit more, theres a line around some parts...

 

Thx u guys Very much for the Comments

 

Nice render Keep up the good work

 

Thats even better than your second render!! Looks cool, great job! 8/10

 

niice first render keep 'em coming