First Render

First go at a render.
Forget the bit at the left LOL. What do you lot think?

 

It looks pretty good for your first render, but the gun is super-messed up, theres a like 1px black border, and you should save it as a trasparent .png

GJ

 

better?

 

Nice render for a first job! but next time use a rectangular tool to get rid of all that excess stuff (on the left in your case) and make it transparent (save as a .png)
I want to see your next renders! GJ!

 

That's pretty good for your first render.

 

da gun looks rusted

 

yeah, as mentioned before, the gun is kinda messed up a bit. And it may just be my eyes, but there seems to be Scarce traces of white around the edges in some parts. Might just be my eyes messing with me, but other than that its great as a first render! :lol:

 

pretty good job on that

 

thats reall good for your first render...just get rid of those trace marks and u should be good!!

 

that look sweet dude. good job

 

yeah the second is a vast improvement, gets rid of the black line around it

 

nice for your first, gj man.

 

oh yeah oh yeah good good