First Render I Have Ever Made !

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  1. nightmare7570

    nightmare7570 Well-Known Member

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    [​IMG]When


    plz plz rate
    and tell me what is there wrongs
    so that i can learn
    and remember this is my first
     
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    GenX Art Well-Known Member

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    Dude that is a wicked first one!

    Only the arms look a little rough, try smoothing them up a little.
    Good job on the hair also m8, must people (like me) f**k that up :D

    Maybe next time post this one in the non-gaming renders!

    Grtzzz
     
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    thank you dude for comment
    ur right the hands are not good
    but i think that the hair is the most important part in the render
    so i spent about 37 minutes with it :unsure:
    but the result make me feel good :D
    maybe next render i'll fix them :D
    i'm sorry for posting this in wrong section

    and plz rate it ;)
     
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    Very nice 4 first, much better than my first! Arms are a little rough but its excellent for ur first! :D
     
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    ^^ thank you for these nice words
    that encourage me to make a new renders
    i'm glad that u like the render
    wait for other renders
     
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    It's a nice render for your first one, But it's a bit choppy still
     
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    Looks good, decent cut.
     
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    sexy girl...

    Nice rendering :P
     
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    Good job, very, very nice hair.
     
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    Dude, shes like 14...

    Anyways, its a good render, choppy around the arms but its still pretty good...
     
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    very nice render good job !! Beatuful cut
     
  12. Cleric_of_Chaos

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    Nice for a first.I like it..
     
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    ~niCe job on your 1st render there~ :)
     
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    Really nice for your first, gj
     
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    the first thing i can say is wrong is obvious

    wrong section xD should be in the NON-Game render section

    but the cut is really good for your first one nice job man :D

    hope to see some more keep at it
     
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