First Render: Bomberman

Original

Render:



Puma Fire is my name on like every other forum, it's not here because I don't have enough credits to change it yet. So no, I did not rip this. Credits are appreciated so this name change can be obtained. It's also my first so be gentle.

 

Ahh Bomberman, the old classic days. By the way, you missed a spot on his right arm. And also, you don't necessarily need to change your username, make a new tag with your current username and paste it on your render if you are planning on posting it here.

 

well I really want the name change because that's the one I use now. and this super dark bg makes it look incredibly bad.

 

Very good for your first render.
Smooth cut, I like.
Only problem is the white specks around it.
Other than that, it's good.

 

its really good for a first render u left some white below his right arm and his bottom middle part otherwise great render

 

Thanks rendering is alot harder than it looks.

 

nice cut bit choppy though i guess its fine :blink:

 

Well, the black background shows the most mistakes you made. Therefore, it's the best. Now, you know where to improve.
In this case you need to work on those tid-bits outside the render. As mentioned before, there are little white (and green, blue, etc) outlines in places.

~Whit3 Boi

 

Cute, but kind of difficult to use unless for a vector.

-ABCC

Btw decent cut

 

very cute render, bomberman is best

nice job

 

Odd choice in render.

The cut is decent for a first, but preview over a black background and you will see that you left small bits of whatever the background was.

5/10, Good job for your first, man.

 

Thanks I have a strategy now for those little bits that escape me. So far it's worked out pretty well.

 

Bomberman looks so cute! :lol: This render is definently usable :lol:

 

Not bad for a first. I see a faint outline all around the render though.