First One =p

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  1. -=mr hankey=-

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    Wow that's really good for a first.
     
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    really nice keep it up
     
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    tyty :D

    any advice?

    wait yalla re bad critiques i left some of bg in the bottom :P


    EDIT: updated :)
     
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    bumpo more thoughts plz
     
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    You left in some background between the left wing and the body of the guy with wings, other than that great job.
     
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    any other thoughts?
     
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    I take it back, the other spots between the wing feathers should be filled in, seeing as there's a hand behind them.
     
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    I think it's pretty awesome for a first. Bit small for a render though, don't you agree?
     
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