First In Three

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Kalli, Nov 22, 2007.

  1. Kalli

    Kalli Senior Member

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    Yea so I finally touched photoshop again after 3 months....I was just going for something simple...but here it be...CnC MUCH needed...not just I like it or what not.

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    colours are good bit theres not much going on...
     
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    Kalli Senior Member

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    Yea I was trying to add a little more going on....but like I want it to be a subtle tag, nothing really going on...kinda like calm. But yea, there is something missing.
     
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    I like it. maybe a bit too empty but not really sure what else you could actually do with it.

    also, maybe change the world "color" to a more orange color.
     
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    Well there is no depth in it. I dont understand which is the focal point either the text or the abstract thing? As colous I like them. But you should work out what I mentioned before :)
     
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    reb00ter, just curious, do you really understand what depth means?
     
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    Well, I'm going to give you the best comment I can.

    I think the render isn't really fitting in with the background style, it could also use some blending, and at the left corner it looks too dark compared with the right. (I know there is an light effect but it is still a little to dark)
     
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    I'm likling the subtle feel of it, but it may be a little too subtle. There could be just a little more going on with it.
     
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    You should add some kind of illustrator swirl to it. :)
     
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    work on the compo
     
  11. Kalli

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    Hehe...the background is the render...hehe

    Thanks for the comments guys, yea gonna take awhile to get back into the swing of things haha
     
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    That's it exactly. It's a purty tag, just the composition could be more interesting. But hey, first tag in 3 months.

    (I laughed when that kid said it had no depth...)
     
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    Yea, dont you just love when people come on here trying to act like they know what they are talking about....hehe
     
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    Haha. Tis funny. Has great depth. Also, whoever said to blend... WHY? It's supposed to(or from what I can tell) be something like seeing something close up with the background out of focus far off behind it. You don't want to blend that. That would be odd...


    I like it, but compo/focal needs tad bit or work. First thing I saw was the text, then the abstract on the right. Maybe try and bring more attention to the abstract.

    I like it overall. Nice tag for 3 months out. :D
     
  15. domkantthink

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    I agree completley with darth. Its definitley a cool tag but my eyes were immediatly drawn to the text. If you could spruce up the render a bit it would be way sick.
     

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