First In A While

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Agon, Sep 12, 2009.

  1. Agon

    Agon Well-Known Member

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    Here it is, first in a while. Did it for a friend on another forum.

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    CnC Highly appreciated guys.
     
  2. Strykor

    Strykor Well-Known Member

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    Meh :>.
    I pretty like it. You oculdve used some more of that signature, I do not like that hard coloring ending up suddenly in the white.
    You could improve your text, as well. ^^ Maybe try out some clipping masks or something.
    The flow is pretty great but the lighting does not seem very good.
    You just added a light spot on the head of the render. <.< This looks a little miserable but you can
    improve. The clolrs are pretty nice, I like the slight green / orange -> blue contrast. :).
    This one could maybe need a border or something, I would've choosed a higher height as well.
     
  3. Agon

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    Yeah, I haven't made anything in quite a while, and that one was only 9 layers, 8 not including the text, 7 not uncluding the white background, so I did not really put time into it, just trying to get in the flow of things.

    BTW I am downloading your psd packs, they look amazing man. Great Work.
     
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    I like the idea of a white background, just seems there's a little too much of it. I can't really say anything else otherwise it would be just what Strykor said, but um, yeah, it's got potential :P
     
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    I think the orange and red and stuff should go out to the sides more
    And the text is a little awkward
    I like it a lot though
     
  6. Agon

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    So, I tried fixing some stuff up, what do you guys think?

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