First In A While

<div align="center">Been gone from gfx for a while and this is my first siggy jus need some input on this one ^_^

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Looks Coowl
Clear the face a bit and put text closer to the efx cuz it's like a second focal
gj

 

Nice style.
The problem you have is now that the text is very distracting, but when you remove
it you create a very huge dead area. Although you could fix that up with the lighting
if you create there a darker part, the contrats would maybe work.

The render is a bit hard to see and the coloring seems overcontrasted.

But as i said, I pretty like your style.

 

focal's too messy

 

agreed with the post above, try adding some more effects on the left as it seems rather empty