First Ever Render

Orig:
http://www.gamespot.com/pc/action/fear/scr...dex.html?page=8
Image 147

Render:

 

A little choppy, but overall good for your first try.

 

That's very nice for a first one
A little choppy at some parts, but with a bit of practice, you'll be making great renders soon

 

Choppy but gj for your first try

 

Good render! though what does choppy mean? lol im new

 

nice, but it has a white stripe all around

 

When cutting out a rounded shape, the edge has to be cut round as well, and not with square corners and stuff.
When the cut isn't round, but consist out of large angles, then a render is called choppy, like it is chopped out with an axe instead of cut with a scissor

 

Not bad for your first one!! Keep up the good work man! ^_^

 

Pretty choppy but still good overall