-->final Fantasy<--drowning -every Last Breath<-update

k,
well i been ina FF craze no idea y lol!!.
well i went back to my roots for this 3'rd sig. spent a good 3 hours on it.
i think it still needs a few tweaks just not sure yet.
i am quite happy with it tho ,
gettin my skills back ^^
CnC PLZ

Ver3

 

don't like it, way to messy, colors don't fit either.

no offence but just don't like it.

 

It would be pretty cool if there wasnt 100 things going on at once.

 

thnx guys,
no man no offence taken we onli grow through crit, man thnx ^^ c now i can go back n fix it n it b pretier

 

add'ed ver 2 toned down ,
so what now?
lol tone it down some more?

 

V2 is better but they overall sig is really pulling away from the render.

It's being drowned out. Make that move visible and low the opacity on some of the other C4D's

 

thnx, i'll edit i tl8ter,
but fyi, for ver 2 their r no c4d's but ver1 have c4d

 

yes version2 is better..... v1 is way too busy


but the text is kinda hard to read... the end part of drowning inparticular

also i think your render is abit too faded out imo

 

yeh thnx, i was planin on fxin that with the tweaks the other guy said aswell, ty ^^.
n the text was suspouse b like that the end just dissapears

 

Cool effects, but it seems kind of messy and the render is overblended. Text is kind of large.

 

thnx,
hmm i think i f'd up LMAO!!!
ver 3 is up i think ima do ver 3 again later but yeh some parts were changed

 

I like ver 3.

 

thanks guys

 

ver 3 is good.
i think there is too much over his hand.... hands are important parts of sigs ! i think... well for me at least.
pretty good

 

hey thnx,
yeh iuno, lol i wanted his hand 2 b cover'd alot hence drownin like hes bein tied down or something