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Discussion in 'GR Classic Archive' started by Oroboro, Mar 30, 2006.

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  1. Oroboro

    Oroboro Well-Known Member

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    This is one of my best renders...

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    Comments Please!
     
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    Good try, but it's a bit small, there's a faint glow around most of it and there are a couple of spots on the right side of the blue wing you missed. Also a few edges were missed (inbetween the wing and cape, by her hand holding the sword, and the bottom left corner). Good try, it just needs some minor touchups.
     
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    i just fixed it up a bit,it looks a lil better
     
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    You still missed a few spots. Look closely at the tip of the blue wing on the right, there is still the spot by her hand, and also the two cut ins on the wing on the right side still need to be cut out. I hope you don't mind constructive criticism. :D
     
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    looks nice but my only problem whith this render is the size.
     
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    i abolutly LOVE the render, but its too small xD
     
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    updated again with a few touch ups. also it was the biggest one i could find atm.
     
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    sick render dude i will cred ya if i use it.
     
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    small, but cool man
     
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    Very nice but too small.
     
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    Like i said,this was the smallest i could find.
    And thanks for the comments guys. :)
     
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    Nice render, gj. It's a pity it's a bit too small, it should be useable though. :)
     
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    -pRo!! Well-Known Member

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    Yeh There Is A Faint Glow Round The Edge Not The Sorta Thing Id Use

    Regards
    -pRo!!
     
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    Good work man, keep it up :D

    Try tackling larger pictures; I am sure those will be more rewarding :D
     
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    i like this one
    very nice cuttin
     
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