I actually like the stock placement. You could put it in the middle, and then place c4ds on each side of her to create more flow. If you move the c4ds closer to her body I think you might like the outcome better. The lighting is misplaced. Instead of having it over her hair, it should be coming up by her shoulder (notice how her neck/shoulder area is the brightest spot of her body.) As for the text, I think it would look better in the middle of those c4ds and maybe make it a different color. The tag really has potential, I like it. The current flow and color are nice. I love the stock, too *points to sig* lol