Fantasy

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Visual121, Jul 27, 2008.

  1. Jul 27, 2008 at 11:03 AM #1
    Visual121

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  2. Jul 27, 2008 at 11:20 AM #2
    Aedus

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    I'm finding it really hard to actually make out what the render is.

    I think it should be a bit clearer.
    The tag as a whole doesn't have much depth, needs a stronger vocal and also there isn't much flow.
     
  3. Jul 27, 2008 at 12:12 PM #3
    YashBhatt

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    Pretty Hard to make out
    Where's the "FANTASY GIRL"
     
  4. Jul 27, 2008 at 12:17 PM #4
    yogurt

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    Yeah I am also having a hard time making out what the focal is.
     
  5. Jul 27, 2008 at 1:53 PM #5
    ThE DaRkSiD3

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    is it some robot horse? looooll xD i dunno xD but i think it looks pretty good
     

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