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Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by Roroni, Feb 23, 2008.

  1. Roroni

    Roroni Senior Member

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    As the topic description says, Another noob attempt to make a large peice :(

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  2. X0rn

    X0rn Well-Known Member

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    it looks cool, i like it!
     
  3. Coke

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    I like it indeed.. But you should make the text alittle more clear, I almost can't read the text tbh :) But very nice indeed..
     
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    Leave the unfocused stand out, leave an abstract feel and get rid of the text along with the flowers and everything thats clear. The background would be great on its own.
     
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    Agreed, the text is a little hard to read. I still like it though :D .
     
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    Really like it, although the flowers look a little too sharp and so you lose some of the blending and flow of the piece. Try blurring them out a bit.
     
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    I would like it better without the flowers and grass, with something more simple.
    Very nice colors though.
     

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