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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Ikuzo, Jan 11, 2009.

  1. Ikuzo

    Ikuzo Well-Known Member

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    The depth and lighting is really nice but the effects seem to be a bit too bright and distracting from the render, other than that it looks pretty good, the effects themselves are nice just the fact that they are so bright kind of kills it for me. Nice work other than that, keep it up.
     
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    It's a very good point...thanks for the critique.
     
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    Sanity Penguin My sex is on fire

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    Good use of my render ^^
    I like the effects but it's as Dommy said: It's a bit much and kinda hectic. You should try to give it more flow rather than having the effects squirmish all over the place ^^
    Lighting seems a bit off as well seeing as there's a lot of it coming in from the windows but it's not really being reflected onto his face properly :)
     
  5. Ikuzo

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    Thanks Sanity. I think I'll take it back to PS and fix up the lighting, it's something I was struggling with. Thanks for the cnc.
     
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    Yup, work on composition.
    Its really well blended and nice depth. Just that the brightness of the effects clash with lighting of the tag.
    But overall, well done. :) KIU!
     
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    thanks I'll keep it all in mind for next time :)
     
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    Looks cool
    I dont think the effectts are too much, i like them, it's just that they're a bit too bright at the bottom, while they shouldn't be imo.
    Like stated above there's a bit of a problem with the lighting. It comes from the windows and it shines on the wall, on the floor, and on his face, just looks unnatural. Try to use the burn tool to darken some parts of the sig. Also, personally i would darken the part of the wall to the right of the render, i guess it will increase the feeling of depth in it, and most of all (and most important) i think it will make the signature look cooler.

    Other then that, great job!
     
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    appreciate the critique dude.
     

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