Expectance.

Hmmm...Mixed feelings with this one. I think it might be showing my rustiness, lolz.

 

way too dark on left.

 

i think a bit sharpening on the focal and u have a winner alrdy..
really like the flow..

 

I think it's got good lighting and colors. But you could have done more with it. A lot of negative space.

 

Thanks for the comments guys. =)

Its meant to be - negative space 'n all.

 

dark on left bright n right . doesnt go imo

 

imo, the comcept is good, but it would be better with less negative space, and more focal.
the right side looks a bit oversharpened to me.
I really like the lighting and colors