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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by The Vision, Jul 17, 2011.

  1. The Vision

    The Vision Well-Known Member

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    Still tweaking my style....
     
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    not a fan of the sharp diagonal lines. maybe if you cut the sharp a little idk not my favourite
     
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    I loved the sharp lines... u made them with Wind Effect?? I always wanted to learn how to use Wind in a cool way... I can only make text with it
     
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    I loved the sharp lines... u made them with Wind Effect?? I always wanted to learn how to use Wind in a cool way... I can only make text with it
     
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    well this is certanly exclusive.i love it.
     
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    I mean I love the design and the way you used your strokes to emphasise the viewer's attention onto the subject. However I think the darkness within the diagonal lines does get a bit distracting when you look at it overall. I think in future when you do something similar take it into consideration that you want the subject to be the clearest out of the whole piece and therefore have the most dynamics. So maybe lose some of the darkness in the lines and add some darkness within the subjects hair and shadows for a little depth.
     
  7. [.BC.] David

    [.BC.] David 吉祥物

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    Too messy and your flow is everywhere...not good.
     
  8. The Vision

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    Wow, these forums have become a joke

    Everything you have ever made is garbage

    glad the forums are dead
     
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    That's what we call criticism my good man. I also agree with him. The flow is all over. The text looks a little bleh too, mainly because of how huge it is.
     
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    text takes off the focal and you probably could have less angled strokes effect in there but otherwise its good. ;)
     

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