I couldn't blend it as well as I would've liked, and I couldn't get any decent text in so I didn't v1 v2 CnC
V2 is the better one, although the difference is almost not noticeable. I really love all of the effects, and the blurring and sharpening. It looks better without text too! Great job!
Take a 65 px soft round brush. Use the eye dropper on that green to the right of her sholder. ( the darker green ) Select that colour go back to the brush.... on a new layer set it to LINEAR DODGE and brush one single stroke on the bottom right of her shoulder, lower the opacity if you need too. Duplicate that layer and more it to the right about 5-8 mm by eye and adjust the opacity. Move this layer down your pallet if need then go back to the top and make 2 or 3 gradien maps by going Layer > New layer Adjustment> Gradient map ... select load gradients and load your PASTELS ... use one of them then play with the blending options and opacity settings. it will be 50 times better with these small quick changes... Feel free to pm me the psd if you want me to play around with it then i'll send it back to you to learn from.